In our website, Literacies in Schools, we tried to persuade our readers that the school you come from has an effect on how you feel about yourself as a reader, writer, or as an academic person because schools portray literacy in different ways. We interviewed 7 people from different schools including public, private, and boarding school to compare the different types of literacies found in each. we argue that all schools have the same literacy and all students are taught in the same way just by going to school. i think that our layout was working. my story needs work and i would like advice on organization. i would like to be given advice on anything that is confusing in our paper. if given more time, i think we would find more research about each of the other schools and see what research has been done.
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Molly, I thought that you guys did a great job on your website. My first thought when I opened the link to it was that it was very easy to navigate through and I liked how you started with your mission. What i took from it is that there are pros and cons of going to different schools whether it be public, private, or boarding. Each one specializes in something differently. I think some of the things you need to change ( as we talked about in class already) is that your layout should be changed a little. On the private page you need to change it so the other two interviews aren't at the bottom of the page because it is hard to see those. I don't think that there was anything confusing in your webpage. It was easy to look at and I think the conclusion was strong. If you change the things we talked about in class I think this will be a very successful "paper". Good job Molly!
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